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[2023/ 9/ 9] The chart below shows the sales (US dollars) of different categories in a particular shop all the year round in the US in 2001.
【主体段分段】:
:按照消费类别分段(本篇文章采用此种分段方法)
:按照季节分段
【开头段】
The bar chart compares five types of consumer goods in terms of their sales(in US dollars) in a shop in US throughout 2001.
【概述段】
In general, jewelry earned more profits than other items in the given year, but male clothing was less lucrative than others.
思路要点:
就全年来讲,jewelry整体销量较高,但male clothing的数据整体较低
【Body 1】
In winter, jewelry was the most profitable item, with the sales of $120000. Subsequently, this figure saw a dramatic decline to $80000 in spring,before climbing marginally by $20000 in autumn.Likewise, the sales of clothing showed a similar trend.To be more specific, from winter to spring, there emerged a constant drop in both the figures for female and male clothing from roughly $83000 to $70000 and from $40000 to $20000 respectively. The final quarter witnessed a slight riseby around $10000 in these two figures.
语言点提示:生活化描述
思路要点:前三个类别
- Jewelry:winter销量最高($120000)spring急剧下降到$80000autumn小幅度上升了$20000.
- clothing的销量呈类似趋势
- female和male clothing的销量:从winter到spring,销量持续下降(分别从$83000 $70000和$40000$20000)
- 最后一季度两者都小幅度上升了$10000
【Body 2】
We can also see thata different trend could be found in the sales of other two types of items. Originally, the sales of cosmetics($50000) were roughly twice as large as the figure for sports($30000). Afterwards, these two figures grewto the same figure at $60000 in Spring. Summer marked the season when cosmetics earned the least profit throughout the year of 2001($30000),after whichthis figure more than doubledto $70000 in the last quarter. Similarly, the sales of sports decreased to $40000 in summer, followed by a slight growthin autumn to the same figure as it was in spring.
思路要点:剩下两个类别
- 和之前三种的销量趋势不同
- 最初cosmetics销量是sports的2倍随后这2个产品的销量上升,在spring达到相同数值$60000.
- Summer, cosmetics销量最低($30000) 在最后一个季度翻了一倍多,达到$70000
- sports:小幅度下降在summer达到$40000autumn轻微上升回到和spring相同的数值
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